Hi Michael, Overall, I think your pitch was great. You have an engaging tone and great hand movement. The only thing I will suggest will be recording from an angle that is parallel to your face rather than from a lower angle, as you did in this video, as it looks as if you were talking down to the viewers. I like the fact that you open your pitch by explaining the current situation as well as with the opportunity and growth potential for your idea. This pitch allowed me to better understand your idea, I really like it, you explained it in a simple and effective way, great job!
Hi Michael,
ReplyDeleteOverall, I think your pitch was great. You have an engaging tone and great hand movement. The only thing I will suggest will be recording from an angle that is parallel to your face rather than from a lower angle, as you did in this video, as it looks as if you were talking down to the viewers. I like the fact that you open your pitch by explaining the current situation as well as with the opportunity and growth potential for your idea. This pitch allowed me to better understand your idea, I really like it, you explained it in a simple and effective way, great job!